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Katharine Kapodistria's avatar

This is chilling. The build-up was great. I had no clue where the story was going at first, and I loved that.

Verdant Butterfly's avatar

This was moving and eerie. I loved how you built it up gently and then hit with that heart stopping moment: “Look, darling, it’s your father!” That line gave me chills. A beautifully haunting piece.

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